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This is only my second sonnet every written and it's been a year since I wrote the first one. I wrote it in, like, half an hour, and it's still too new for me to see it very objectively. Please tear...
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Hi Newt, The poem contrasts the intellectual pursuits with more more pressing and less abstract requirements. The problem is that the more pressing pursuits are left as abstract as the intellectual....
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Hi, Newt. Or, for L1, you could say: Today, our words wax in the brainy prose - that's got 1 substitution. Check all your words to make sure they say exactly what you want them to. Bill mentions...
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Thank you thank you for the feedback! It's awesome to know where to begin revising. I'll work on it when I get the time and post the revised version.
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Hi Newt, Do you have a first name, or are you utterly wedded to being forever an amphibian! Welcome to Sonnet Central, and well done for being brave and posting your sonnet. You say 'It's awesome to...
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Hello Newt, I think you need to spend more than half an hour writing a sonnet. Some people will spend more time critting it. Best regards,
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